spell out "Four" options
-interesting discourse on standards here
headings: make it clear that these are a sequence
Heading ONe: Law Enforcement Investigation
when addressing the target audience (the youth in process), what are the advantages/disadvantages of different forms of address
1st person
2nd person? You
replace the repetition of "you could...."
with one LARGE FONTED "YOU COULD:"
followed by the list
because the 4 points under the first header aren't a sequence, you don't need numbers.
options, rather than steps
blank/negative space: important, but,
contact info
who made the document
glossary: good redundancy, because you can repeat the terminology and clarify. Legal terminology is very compressed; therefore, it will be helpful for some readers to look at a glossary
also: a cast of characters! Identify all those will be present and/or active in these procedures.
after If/then
keep bullets but add "metadiscourse" that indicates sequentialiity
i.e. "first,
"next,
"then, after that"
"finally, lastly'\
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