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Page history last edited by PBworks 16 years, 2 months ago

spell out "Four" options

-interesting discourse on standards here

 

headings: make it clear that these are a sequence

 

Heading ONe: Law Enforcement Investigation

 

when addressing the target audience (the youth in process), what are the advantages/disadvantages of different forms of address

 

1st person

2nd person? You

 

replace the repetition of "you could...."

with one LARGE FONTED "YOU COULD:"

followed by the list

 

because the 4 points under the first header aren't a sequence, you don't need numbers.

 

options, rather than steps

 

blank/negative space: important, but,

contact info

who made the document

glossary: good redundancy, because you can repeat the terminology and clarify. Legal terminology is very compressed; therefore, it will be helpful for some readers to look at a glossary

also: a cast of characters! Identify all those will be present and/or active in these procedures.

 

 

after If/then

 

keep bullets but add "metadiscourse" that indicates sequentialiity

i.e. "first,

 

"next,

 

"then, after that"

 

"finally, lastly'\

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